Factual Short - Treatment

Here is the treatment I wrote for our factual short for Production Practice:

Le Cheveux

My initial idea came from watching the film “Le mari de la coiffeuse” (The hairdresser’s husband) and having a recent haircut. This led me to comprehend the intimacy of a haircut and become interested in the relationship between a hairdresser and their client. In no other situation, except very close family, would it be acceptable to so closely touch a person for a long period of time. Also the washing of hair which is seen today as such a private thing is common practice. I want to explore the aspect of trust within this relationship as a client puts their complete faith in a hairdresser, as job prospects and life in general can be based on a person’s image which is figuratively in the hands of the hairdresser. I think this film will be interesting to an audience as getting a haircut is an experience that almost all people have in their lives; it is highly relatable but will have a twist irregular to most regular documentaries.

The film would follow the working life of a Hairdresser, watching as they insert themselves into the lives of their clients. Exploring the professional and personal relationships that are involved within this line of work. Delving into how a hairdresser is somewhat like a priest symbolically baptising their clients as they wash their hair and confide their sins and problems throughout their time. The film would also play up the factor of vulnerability as when a person is wet with running mascara and foil in their hair they may look what is considered their ugliest. However they feel comfortable within this situation and will put themselves in this position time and time again, as they desire the end result.

An auntie of mine is a mobile hairdresser; she will be the main subject of the film giving the point of view of the professional. I have received permission from her to follow her for a few days during filming, as she uses a car in her business she is willing to allow me to travel with her whilst filming, this may also be useful when capturing her on the move. I have also contacted a few of her regular customers that are willing to be interviewed as part of the film. These clients will give a different angle and show the views of the customer.

I found the French style of “Le mari de la coiffeuse” inviting and beautiful, it helped to illustrate the intimacy between the couple. I wanted to incorporate an aspect of glowing look into the film as it would give the film a professional but “indie” look which I find striking. I plan to use a small amount of time-lapse within the film during an entire haircut, showing to the viewer the complete process and giving the visual relief of a before and after shot. I also plan to use some royalty free vintage videos sourced from “http://www.istockphoto.com” I wanted to add these videos as they would accentuate the French new-wave style of the film.